Thursday, 10 November 2011

Week 14 Review of rough draft (Thursday)

Today we had ameeting with Debbie, although she liked it there were some changes which she suggested;

*Lose the split cut editing - As it doesnt seem to flow with the pace of the rest of it. More appropriate for a high action sequence.
* Few shakey camera shots during "Forest" sequence - replacement needed
*Obtain a possible bible quote thats relevant 1-2 max (don't over do it, rough draft had 3-4 in place) this is to create a sense of mystery - i.e. What book is she reading etc
*Unnessary credits - equipment used / programs used etc

Both me and Amy agrre that the above suggestions were fair and can see how it will benafit the film.

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