Wednesday 2 May 2012

Rough script.

This script was wrote by me and then altered slightly by Emma (director) and Clarice (producer)
[Offscreen]



Gary

Yeah, I'd say its got way out of control.

(Laughs)



You'd have thought i would have realised before now.


EXT. Central sheffield. early morning.


Gary, A man of 35 is stood within a city landscape, some greenery and a park bench can be seen out of focus. He has short brown hair, unshaven however not untidy. He is from a working class background. The man walks into focus of the camera with a grin.




Gary

I'd say I've always been a positive person, you've got to be these days, with all the conflict and shit! and to be honest I've had my fair share of that.


(Nervous chuckle)


Gary looks nervous almost as if hes holding something back. Any incline to this is dismissed by Gary shaking it off with a light grin.



Gary


I wouldn't say Ive got too many interests or ambitions, i suppose I'm quite into footie.


Gary pulls his head down and takes his hat off and points at the badge.


GARY

Yeah.. supported the blades since 86 and always will!.. I used to be quite into my fitness too I guess, I'd go jogging with my mate Ben and in the summer we'd meet up with the lads and find a beer garden for a cheeky pint!....


Gary drops his hat accidentally due to his hand gestures, he mutters oops under his breath and stumbles to pick it up, he comes back into shot, wipes his hat and puts it onto his head, grinning lightly.



GARY

I remember this time when I was a little un' I was having a kick about in the back garden. Picture this; neighbours brand new green house, one of them big expensive ones, my foot merely touched the leather when I heard a crash of glass.


Gary stops and kicks the air and looks into the distance as if he is re-enacting. The sound of glass smashing is added over the top as the words are spoken.




Gary


I got into some trouble for that!


gary's mum


GARRY!!!! what you done now!?


Gary gives off a little smirk, whilst the woman's voice is shouting




GARY

Yeah



(Chuckles)


CUTAWAY:


EXT. Scenic location. behind train station/norfolk park


Gary is walking along side camera, his happy go lucky attitude can be seen as he walks along pushing something out of shot. Occasionally though, his gaze wonders almost like he is daydreaming , and its then that hints towards something deeper that troubles him
.



GARY

Yeah, Family life is crazy aint it - has its ups and downs. Im a family man myself yanno! aye ive got two kids myself..A boy and a girl. ERE'



Gary stops suddenly and reaches straight for his pockets and pulls out a ragged wallet. CU of wallet. Gary pulls out what looks like multiple pieces of paper from the wallet and flicks through them, we see several old scratch cards and a betting slip before he reaches a picture of his two children.




GARY

My boy, I'd like to think, is a chip of the block.


(smiles to himself)



He sees the good in everything, and a little accident just like his old man.


EXT. CENTRAL SHEFFIELD. EARLY MORNING.


Gary is in the same location as before, sat on a bench.



GARY

This was before my brother was born, after he came along it all changed.




(Pauses and seems to drift of in his own world after a while a smile comes on his face and he starts to laugh, Audio sounds of beach, such as children and waves)




It was one of the best holidays I went on as a child, we stayed in this tiny caravan. It was fuckin' pissin it down. I was sat probably moaning, my dad had had enough and packed us into the car.




(Pauses)




We parked up on the beach front, me and my mum looked at each other, we thought he'd gone mad.......he had stripped down to his boxers and was of running down the beach in the pouring rain, mental! The crazy fuck went for a swim in torrential rain,


(laughs to himself)


think he went a bit mad stuck in a small caravan with me and mum.

The rest of the holiday was hot and sunny, but the old man got 'man flu'


(pauses)


He proper made that holiday for me
.


EXT. SCENIC LOCATION. BEHIND TRAIN STATION/NORFOLK PARK


Same walking location as before.


Gary is just putting the wallet back into his jeans. As he does so, a stack of scratch cards fall out of his pocket. He scrambles to the floor trying to quickly pick them up, making embarrassed glances to camera


GARY


I'm not close to my kids anymore or wife, nobody to blame other than myself i guess.


I'd started hanging round with an older crowd,looking back now it was a bad idea to be honest. We would all go to the dogs, or the footie and would always place bets, i felt like I'd have to join in....It just got out of control, every time I'd win it was the best feeling ever, like a thrill, a kind of high.



EXT. CENTRAL SHEFFIELD. EARLY MORNING.



GARY

Tessa, My wife didn't find out for some years. I used to head to the casino with the lads after work and not come home till late. Got hard to hide though after all the bills kept coming through the door
.


Int. Corridor of a house. flash back.


Gary is in a low lit room staring towards the letterbox. One letter flies through the door.


GARY



They just kept coming, more and more brown envelopes. I tried to hide them but it got too much and I found myself in quite a mess.


EXT. CENTRAL SHEFFIELD. EARLY MORNING.



GARY


When she found out, well, it wasn't a good day.


God bless her, we were going through a tough time as it was, I should have got my act together. She threw me out it was so humiliating. I lost everything that day.


ext. house. day time. flash back


Gary is scene outside his house shouting at the top upstairs window which was also in sight, clothes were being thrown out of it.



GARY


I could see the kids in the upstairs window while she threw my clothes out...i was so stupid to through everything away.


EXT. SCENIC LOCATION. BEHIND TRAIN STATION/NORFOLK PARK


GARY

So yeah, my life has changed a lot since then. It's been like this for about a year now.


When i got chucked out, Ben, my best mates helped me through it, he was there for me, i cannot thank him enough.


But for now I'm on the streets, scraping by.



I need to build myself up again. It gets pretty lonely on the streets, everyone needs someone there for them no matter who it is.


TWO-SHOT: Gary and his dog, Ben.



Don't we Ben, Lad!


He feeds the dog a biscuit and ruffles his head. He gets up and walks off with the dog lead in one hand and pushing a trolley.

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